i respect and appreciate the love, effort and passion that went into this game or lets say project. im sure many would have left an unfinished game as it would be ones first project but you kept going and you can really see the differences while you go trough the game. Id say overall its one of the better ones to play compared to all the alternatives from the same time but this one even has a chapter two ;) which is ofc nice because you get to see the character you get to know in another game and it didnt just end
I'm pretty early into it for now, only on day 6 but I have some things I want to say, might edit once I finish the game if I feel like it
First of all I want to say I like the idea behind the game, the book written by MC's mom transporting him in a different realm where there will be issues but where there's everything he needs to solve these issues is a decent set up. Doesn't make for huge stakes but there doesn't need to be.
As for the character models they feel a bit uncanny, like there's something that doesn't look right but you can't really pinpoint it. The hair is slightly bothering me but this is all subjective and not an actual negative thing.
When it comes to the storytelling though I have something to say, especially regarding the pacing. I think everything is going too fast at the start, I don't know how it goes later so I won't speak for it, maybe you were in a hurry to finish the ground work and go deeper into it once you have the early stage down, I don't know. But it feels like everything goes way too fast. There is no time to like any character, you just get thrown around left and right without really having time to care about anything or anyone. The situation with Morgan feels like it gets solved too fast, then we're immediately thrown into the thing with Cass and that gets immediately resolved too and she apologizes and calls you Master.
I get it, this isn't supposed to be a game with 10/10 writing, but I still think the pacing is extremely important and decided to share my thoughts. I still appreciate the game and will most likely play it all night
Everything you said here is pretty old news for Serenity. Keep in mind, if you're only in Chapter 1, that stuff was done like 3 and 4 years ago and was my very first project. There are TONS of mistakes and issues. As you progress further into it, you should notice it slightly improving the further you go, both in terms of writing and graphics. Those early scenes are super cringe even for me and I made it! LOL! It desperately needs to be redone, but that task is way too much to handle while still developing Serenity Chapter 2 and also Last Human. I work on them in tandem (Serenity Chapter 2, episode 3 was just released a bit over a month ago, and now I am working on episode 4 of Last Human). Anyway, keep going and hopefully you'll like it. Try my other project, Last Human also. I learned and progressed a lot by the time I started that one. Serenity will be ending with Chapter 2. Probably 4 or 5 more episodes.
Yeah I knew it would be getting better after all that's how gaining experience works, I just like sharing my thoughts on things as they come so I came here to give my current take on the game as I was experiencing it. And I understand that remaking the start of it would be a tremendous amount of work, especially if it involves fixing the pacing issues. Picking when to cut between remaking and leaving as is, lining it up with the complete story, It sounds like a huge pain in the ass
As for your other game I was planning on playing it as soon as I was done with chapter 2, I'm still on chapter 1 for now though so it won't be until quite a few hours from now
Why does my download keep failing on this novel? I downloaded last human without a problem.... I'm on android maybe if I download the PC version and use joiplay it'll work better
That probably has very little to do with the game, and more to do with either your free storage space or some issue on itch itself. I've heard nothing from any of the other android users and it was downloaded a LOT. Best thing I can tell you is try downloading the android version from my MEGA link here: https://mega.nz/file/xcFygQYa#GAaL4YyZOcn2NSQmvEZ39RVhrZyWof_vkpXPS41DWKI Select all of the text in that link, then PASTE it into your android browser. If you just tap the link, it may want a passcode (which is included in the link after the # sign). Most phones will only paste up to that # sign and not get the entire link.
I have a 250gb Sd card in my phone that I use for gaming and such plenty of storage:), I found out yesterday other people such as creators are also having the problem ...
I downloaded the PC version and ported it to joiplay I've finished all 3 of your novels since my last comment so I'd like to say, good job I enjoyed everything you did story was flawless...can't wait for more
This game deserves the 4.5 stars rating. I've been a bit sceptical when I downloaded it, since it has been criticized by many people. But the plot and the characters caught me really fast, which made me finish the game in one session. Great work! Also, I'm looking forward to the planned remake of this chapter :D
This may be a little weird but if you're taking sugyes in most animes and other stuff usually cat girls / neko girls For some reason their tails are extremely sensitive in a really lewd way 😏 It's just a suggestion that's all
if you ever rerender the first chapter for sound effects and all that, or in the future for chapter 2, i heavily recommend the instant transmission sound effect for some of the summoning and appearing instances. Badass in a fight, and funny as a joke. Great game so far though
Any chance someone could compile a list of references and names to other VN's? I found this one because of what happened in the game "Fall of the Angels" and want to explore more that same way. I'll note what I see
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i respect and appreciate the love, effort and passion that went into this game or lets say project. im sure many would have left an unfinished game as it would be ones first project but you kept going and you can really see the differences while you go trough the game. Id say overall its one of the better ones to play compared to all the alternatives from the same time but this one even has a chapter two ;) which is ofc nice because you get to see the character you get to know in another game and it didnt just end
ty for your time
Found this game from A House in the Rift
I'm pretty early into it for now, only on day 6 but I have some things I want to say, might edit once I finish the game if I feel like it
First of all I want to say I like the idea behind the game, the book written by MC's mom transporting him in a different realm where there will be issues but where there's everything he needs to solve these issues is a decent set up. Doesn't make for huge stakes but there doesn't need to be.
As for the character models they feel a bit uncanny, like there's something that doesn't look right but you can't really pinpoint it. The hair is slightly bothering me but this is all subjective and not an actual negative thing.
When it comes to the storytelling though I have something to say, especially regarding the pacing. I think everything is going too fast at the start, I don't know how it goes later so I won't speak for it, maybe you were in a hurry to finish the ground work and go deeper into it once you have the early stage down, I don't know. But it feels like everything goes way too fast. There is no time to like any character, you just get thrown around left and right without really having time to care about anything or anyone. The situation with Morgan feels like it gets solved too fast, then we're immediately thrown into the thing with Cass and that gets immediately resolved too and she apologizes and calls you Master.
I get it, this isn't supposed to be a game with 10/10 writing, but I still think the pacing is extremely important and decided to share my thoughts. I still appreciate the game and will most likely play it all night
Everything you said here is pretty old news for Serenity. Keep in mind, if you're only in Chapter 1, that stuff was done like 3 and 4 years ago and was my very first project. There are TONS of mistakes and issues. As you progress further into it, you should notice it slightly improving the further you go, both in terms of writing and graphics. Those early scenes are super cringe even for me and I made it! LOL!
It desperately needs to be redone, but that task is way too much to handle while still developing Serenity Chapter 2 and also Last Human. I work on them in tandem (Serenity Chapter 2, episode 3 was just released a bit over a month ago, and now I am working on episode 4 of Last Human).
Anyway, keep going and hopefully you'll like it. Try my other project, Last Human also. I learned and progressed a lot by the time I started that one. Serenity will be ending with Chapter 2. Probably 4 or 5 more episodes.
Yeah I knew it would be getting better after all that's how gaining experience works, I just like sharing my thoughts on things as they come so I came here to give my current take on the game as I was experiencing it. And I understand that remaking the start of it would be a tremendous amount of work, especially if it involves fixing the pacing issues. Picking when to cut between remaking and leaving as is, lining it up with the complete story, It sounds like a huge pain in the ass
As for your other game I was planning on playing it as soon as I was done with chapter 2, I'm still on chapter 1 for now though so it won't be until quite a few hours from now
Why does my download keep failing on this novel? I downloaded last human without a problem.... I'm on android maybe if I download the PC version and use joiplay it'll work better
That probably has very little to do with the game, and more to do with either your free storage space or some issue on itch itself. I've heard nothing from any of the other android users and it was downloaded a LOT.
Best thing I can tell you is try downloading the android version from my MEGA link here:
https://mega.nz/file/xcFygQYa#GAaL4YyZOcn2NSQmvEZ39RVhrZyWof_vkpXPS41DWKI
Select all of the text in that link, then PASTE it into your android browser. If you just tap the link, it may want a passcode (which is included in the link after the # sign). Most phones will only paste up to that # sign and not get the entire link.
I have a 250gb Sd card in my phone that I use for gaming and such plenty of storage:), I found out yesterday other people such as creators are also having the problem ...
I downloaded the PC version and ported it to joiplay I've finished all 3 of your novels since my last comment so I'd like to say, good job I enjoyed everything you did story was flawless...can't wait for more
That's great, I'm glad you were able to get them all working! And thanks, there is more to come ;)
is the game harem only or does it have the option of solo Li routes/eventually endings?
I am considering multiple endings where you can choose harem or a single LI, with different endings.
sweeeeert. okay i will happily play
This game deserves the 4.5 stars rating. I've been a bit sceptical when I downloaded it, since it has been criticized by many people. But the plot and the characters caught me really fast, which made me finish the game in one session. Great work!
Also, I'm looking forward to the planned remake of this chapter :D
This may be a little weird but if you're taking sugyes in most animes and other stuff usually cat girls / neko girls For some reason their tails are extremely sensitive in a really lewd way 😏 It's just a suggestion that's all
I love serenity so more and the story too
is this like the last human where its mostly focused on the story instead of the adult content?
ye
I played a bit of this game and was wondering if it continues with the last human if you know? Thank you
It doesn't 'continue' there. But they do crossover.
ok thanks
if you ever rerender the first chapter for sound effects and all that, or in the future for chapter 2, i heavily recommend the instant transmission sound effect for some of the summoning and appearing instances. Badass in a fight, and funny as a joke. Great game so far though
Any chance someone could compile a list of references and names to other VN's? I found this one because of what happened in the game "Fall of the Angels" and want to explore more that same way. I'll note what I see
so far there's cinnamon the nurse from idk what game
what all the name of the game in the mc PC? cuz its like i seen it somewhere but cant remember it?
NTR？